Monday 25 March 2019
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Kia ora Quinn. Your writing was really good.You do a lot of sport’s. you are very talnted.But what is your mum and your dad’s and your brothers name ? I like roblox too..mabye next time you could put your hiyliter in a defrent coulor .what Moive do you like? from Jayden
ReplyDeleteKia ora Quinn I loved the way that you said I play roblox on your Ipad. maybe next time add more information to your sentences next time. Great job on your cybersmart. Maybe add more longer words. From Sahil.
ReplyDeleteHi Quinn, I like your post because you wrote a lot of information.I like Sprite Zero too because it is bubbly. I also like to drink Fanta. Next time please think about the colour of your writing because I found it very hard to read.
ReplyDeleteHello guys do you play Bubble Gum simulator on ROBLOX? Comment down below guys BYE!
ReplyDeleteHello quinn it is Ema-leigh From gilberthorpe school and I love the way you put what you like and hows in your family. you brought me back to when I used to go to yaldhurst model school\yms I had to do one of those. maybe you could put the highlight in a different colour and put more into your sentences. Do you have time for a question you do okay here it is what is your roblox name? because I have roblox I can be friends with you!
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